Sunday, April 20, 2008

As I sleep



Spring, Summer, Winter, Fall,
My heart has experienced them all
do i dare repeat the sequence once more
should i risk a heart so sore
do i shrink away and hide
should i chance another ride
do i turn away and leave
how much more can one grieve
do i leave my heart behind
should anyone be apt to find
an object as obscure
as if to lure
a love so deep
As I sleep

2 comments:

  1. I like the combination of jaunty rhyme and rhythm and sensitive, self-aware feelings.

    Your ones on Unreliable's blog are good too.

    More poems please!

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  2. What a relief, when no one said anything I feared they were avoiding to comment because the poems were embarrassingly childish so I am overjoyed for your nice critique and request for an encore!!!

    Unreliable Witness's enigmatic few word puzzle-like post-it's taunted me making me draw them out and play with them.

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